This is spectacular and I am so in when there is an entire book to read.
I'm not often a fan of 2nd person as too frequently I've seen writers use it to force tension where none actually exists. But here, it serves as a beautiful platform for the very real tension going on for the narrator. Just wonderfully done. 💖💖💖
Thanks so much for reading, Jenn. I really appreciate the kind feedback. It's a decent chunk of my life's work and I absolutely love connecting with readers in response to any part of it.
This is spectacular and I am so in when there is an entire book to read.
I'm not often a fan of 2nd person as too frequently I've seen writers use it to force tension where none actually exists. But here, it serves as a beautiful platform for the very real tension going on for the narrator. Just wonderfully done. 💖💖💖
Thanks so much for reading, Jenn. I really appreciate the kind feedback. It's a decent chunk of my life's work and I absolutely love connecting with readers in response to any part of it.